She's distracted

Can any of my wonderfully musical visitors add music to this? It may need a bit of help with the scanning, and the syntax, and the content.

You want a Caeser Salad at the Burger Bar
The Serving Girl wants to be a Star
She's on a chart to impress her mother
She's texting with one thumb and sucking the other

You ask for Guacamole but it's just mushy peas

There's no getting away from a social disease

Chorus:

She's distracted
She's distracted
you can tell by the way she acted
the light is on but there's no one there
You just shed a tear
But she didn't even care
She's on a chart to impress her mother
She's texting with one thumb and sucking the other

©wrinkled weasel 2009

(Please, no references to giving up the day job - I don't have one)

2 comments:

over the rainbow said...

This might work WW.
Young girl fed up wanting to move on to something better...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ltAGuuru7Q

Jim Baxter said...

With just a few extra beats added here and there e.g 'JUST wants to be a star 'sucking ON the other' - couple of extra link lines - two extra verses before the chorus
then tweaklose a bit of the chorus itself: e.g. -
She's distracted
She's distracted
You can tell from her brainless stare

She's distracted
She's distracted

She DON'T - eeee-ven care


It would about fit 'Rednecks'

http://www.youtube.com/
watch?v=2nGw_vAnqPI

'Look what they're done to your song...'